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carve your name as if i were a stone,
and you like a hard piece of steel
draw the lines of your life in my hand,
for forever will the history be written
with the silence in your eyes,
and it will for ever be read
with the beatings of my heart...

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:icontoirean:
I found a great deal of personal meaning in this piece. I think it is very well written and it speaks, which is my idea of what truly good poetry is.

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When written in Chinese, the word "crisis" is composed of two characters. One represents danger and the other represents opportunity.
:iconthefifthseason:
Thank you, but I share a different view well not actually different but I believe in a way all poetry speaks but someone gets attached to a piece or two because he sees some fragments of him inside it...

;) Not all poetry is good P hahahaha

D

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The awareness of the sad genius... :jsenn:
I carved all the masks i wanted, until i find a new mask i am just gonna be faceless for some and faithless for one...
:icontoirean:
Exactly so.

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When written in Chinese, the word "crisis" is composed of two characters. One represents danger and the other represents opportunity.
:iconthefifthseason:
yes... exactly so...

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The awareness of the sad genius... :jsenn:
I carved all the masks i wanted, until i find a new mask i am just gonna be faceless for some and faithless for one...
:iconxxxmoonstonexxx:
~"carve your name as if i were a stone,
and you like a hard piece of steel
draw the lines of your life in my hand,
for forever will the history be written
with the silence in your eyes,
and it will for ever be read
with the beatings of my heart... "~

:blackrose:

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~*:As Above, So Below:*~
:iconthefifthseason:
my words are only said through my mouth...

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The awareness of the sad genius... :jsenn:
I carved all the masks i wanted, until i find a new mask i am just gonna be faceless for some and faithless for one...
:iconxxxmoonstonexxx:
sorry :p no offense !

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~*:As Above, So Below:*~
:iconthefifthseason:
I know.. just understand i don't like that *

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The awareness of the sad genius... :jsenn:
I carved all the masks i wanted, until i find a new mask i am just gonna be faceless for some and faithless for one...
:iconxxxmoonstonexxx:
:)

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~*:As Above, So Below:*~

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